Fact and Fiction

 For this exercise we were challenged to write two paragraphs. One should contain 3 factual and 1 fictitious elements and a second with the ratio inverted. I found that by just thinking of something from my own personal experience for both and then twisting a different number of things was the easiest approach but here's what I have come up with. I'm not going to say which is which paragraph; I'll leave it to you to guess. I am vainly saying that like anyone will ever read this, or indeed be bothered to have a guess. 


She stood at the top of the stairs, peering down at the front door. It would be about an hour till it opened again when he came home. As she watched, the conversation they’d had replayed over in her head yet again. She teetered on the top step, wondering what he’d feel, if he’d feel, if she were at the foot instead when he got home.

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The sky flashed angrily over head, followed shortly afterward by growing growl that bashed at the ears. But even the storm couldn’t deaden his spirits today; his graduation. His gown flapped behind him as he dashed through the rain holding the mortarboard to his head. Spying a friend they shared a grin dashing up the Barbican steps before farting through the door in their shared glee.

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